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The fall of Elven kingdom (2)

03.06.2009 20:08, x264 (Viimati luges: Anonüümne lugeja @ )
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My first poem in English. :)

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Elven kingdom was a great place.
Sun shone from day to day,
but sun had an awkward face,
it shone in a different way.

It made the flowers bloom
and Elven people kind.
It always shone at noon,
there was no place like that to find.

But in Elven kingdom things changed,
they were totally rearranged...

Because in the light of moon,
the demon woke and said:
"There will be no kingdom soon,"
so demon and evil led.

"Run now, run,
before the darkness takes the sun."'
The Elven kingdom was gone,
elves who survived - none.

Old ancient field,
burned in great fire.
Broken was the soldier´s shield -
demon was not a lier.

There was no kingdom anymore,
fallen was the Elven lord.
So black ages came,
the place was under demon´s flame.

Until elves from north arrived...

Demon was finally killed,
empty gaps were filled.
Deep sadness was away,
elves were happy, seeing a new day.

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Esimene luuletus inglise keeles. Pidi olema riimuv, üldiselt ongi. Kui kellegi arust ei ole, võite öelda, tõstan vabavärsiliste hulka. Loodan, et meeldib ja kõik saavad minu mõtteist aru.

Teavita ebasobivast sissekandest!

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liisu9719

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Zenfira

Sinu inglise keel on vist ikka päris rikkalik. Mina ei suuda küll inglise keeles luuletust kirjutada
 

liisu9719

Ei, ei ole üldse. See luuletus tuli lihtsalt igavusest ja sellest, et mul oli eelmisel suvel tohutult ülejäänud aega, millega polnud midagi peale hakata. Siis viimistlesingi asja.
 

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